VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

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XaGnard said:
I think just having Sam as a separate side story is boring. His strength in the story is his role as an antagonist to Dylan. That Sam is so over-perfect gives the player a measure to judge Dylan and how much effort it took him to get Sophia to where she is now (even if there is still a lot of potential for improvement).

Also, Sam's story, because it is somehow connected to Dylan's story, is a bigger storytelling opportunity than most of the other side characters in AWAM. Does Dylan find out what is going on between Sophia and Sam (maybe peeking into Sam's room through the window), and how does he react, or rather, what are the implications for Sophia if Dylan finds out? Sam-Sophia-Dylan is a much better story than just going through a bunch of subplots where Sophia interacts with way to many characters in the same who are otherwise not related to the main story (Sophia as "A wife and mother"). The fact that Sam once uttered a sentence that didn't seem to fit to his all perfect hero role is strange, because it doesn't really fit in with the rest of the story, but not the end of his path as a counterpart to Dylan. I at least hope that L&P will expand the story between the three of them.

I think the story of Sam alone, without the connection to Dylan, is pretty boring, because Sam is just too perfect. It would be the story of a hero who just gets everything without any effort. He's just boring as a character and brings nothing to the story other than his connection to Dylan.
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Many have commented on the same topic and would love to see a Sam Sophia Dylan storyline but L&P hasn't given any consideration what his subscribers would like to see. He's instead wasting time on unnecessary side stories. I would certainly become a subscriber if he gives importance to the main storyline (Sam Sophia Dylan).
 
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XaGnard said:
I think just having Sam as a separate side story is boring. His strength in the story is his role as an antagonist to Dylan. That Sam is so over-perfect gives the player a measure to judge Dylan and how much effort it took him to get Sophia to where she is now (even if there is still a lot of potential for improvement).

Also, Sam's story, because it is somehow connected to Dylan's story, is a bigger storytelling opportunity than most of the other side characters in AWAM. Does Dylan find out what is going on between Sophia and Sam (maybe peeking into Sam's room through the window), and how does he react, or rather, what are the implications for Sophia if Dylan finds out? Sam-Sophia-Dylan is a much better story than just going through a bunch of subplots where Sophia interacts with way to many characters in the same who are otherwise not related to the main story (Sophia as "A wife and mother"). The fact that Sam once uttered a sentence that didn't seem to fit to his all perfect hero role is strange, because it doesn't really fit in with the rest of the story, but not the end of his path as a counterpart to Dylan. I at least hope that L&P will expand the story between the three of them.

I think the story of Sam alone, without the connection to Dylan, is pretty boring, because Sam is just too perfect. It would be the story of a hero who just gets everything without any effort. He's just boring as a character and brings nothing to the story other than his connection to Dylan.
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I agree, a Sam-Sophia-Dylan route would be a better story for me too. But a serious discussion of this love triangle would definitely go beyond the scope of this porn story and would be completely overwhelming for some players here.
I also think that the dynamic that would be unleashed if Sam or Dylan found out that Sophia had sex with both of them would force the author L&P into writer's block.
Of course, I don't mean simple routes like the cuckold route or the mini-harem route (Sam/Dylan) for Sophia.
I can't even tell you how complicated I think it is to tell such a route, the endless dialogues, inner thoughts and interactions between the three (without sex) and at the same time maintain the erotic tension (if you really take this route seriously).
If you have any suggestions for such a route(s), I would love to read them. Not because I lack imagination, but because my routes for these three characters simply don't fit into the simple world of this porn game.
 
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hzjujk said:
I agree, a Sam-Sophia-Dylan route would be a better story for me too. But a serious discussion of this love triangle would definitely go beyond the scope of this porn story and would be completely overwhelming for some players here.
I also think that the dynamic that would be unleashed if Sam or Dylan found out that Sophia had sex with both of them would force the author L&P into writer's block.
Of course, I don't mean simple routes like the cuckold route or the mini-harem route (Sam/Dylan) for Sophia.
I can't even tell you how complicated I think it is to tell such a route, the endless dialogues, inner thoughts and interactions between the three (without sex) and at the same time maintain the erotic tension (if you really take this route seriously).
If you have any suggestions for such a route(s), I would love to read them. Not because I lack imagination, but because my routes for these three characters simply don't fit into the simple world of this porn game.
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The game when (if) finished should have a "shut the fuck up mode" that gets rid of nearly all of the internal dialogue and some of the unnecessary blabbing/descriptions.
 
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hzjujk said:
I agree, a Sam-Sophia-Dylan route would be a better story for me too. But a serious discussion of this love triangle would definitely go beyond the scope of this porn story and would be completely overwhelming for some players here.
I also think that the dynamic that would be unleashed if Sam or Dylan found out that Sophia had sex with both of them would force the author L&P into writer's block.
Of course, I don't mean simple routes like the cuckold route or the mini-harem route (Sam/Dylan) for Sophia.
I can't even tell you how complicated I think it is to tell such a route, the endless dialogues, inner thoughts and interactions between the three (without sex) and at the same time maintain the erotic tension (if you really take this route seriously).
If you have any suggestions for such a route(s), I would love to read them. Not because I lack imagination, but because my routes for these three characters simply don't fit into the simple world of this porn game.
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If L&P prioritizes the main storyline (Sam Dylan and Sophia) more people are going to subscribe and with more money he can hire a script writer if he thinks he's going to have writer's block.
 
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not every update needs animation.. this would fasten the development time
moreover 2-3 events should be clubbed back into one update this would also fasten the development time
 
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dan_roger69 said:
If L&P prioritizes the main storyline (Sam Dylan and Sophia) more people are going to subscribe and with more money he can hire a script writer if he thinks he's going to have writer's block.
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You're missing Ellie and Patricia. Ellie is more popular than Sam, and neither would get where they have without Patricia
 
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Anteron said:
The game when (if) finished should have a "shut the fuck up mode" that gets rid of nearly all of the internal dialogue and some of the unnecessary blabbing/descriptions.
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Well, since spending time in this thread makes my head turn sour anyway, that would be very helpful to me.
 
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dan_roger69 said:
Many have commented on the same topic and would love to see a Sam Sophia Dylan storyline but L&P hasn't given any consideration what his subscribers would like to see. He's instead wasting time on unnecessary side stories. I would certainly become a subscriber if he gives importance to the main storyline (Sam Sophia Dylan).
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finally some good ideas here. MMF/DP action damnnn.. Best scenes this game could offer. That thing is also so fucking rare, where FMC is in relationship with 2 guys. I only remember one game with something like that.
 
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Lord_Xanatos said:
Progress Report Ver. 0.210
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no money, shorter content what do you expect … you should be happy Sofia opens up a button :love:
Maybe they are just watching erotic toys and the kids get explanations (n)

Can anyone ask how many unique renders? Not counting 20 same renders in a dialogue

Still end of September or Mid September if he goes on holiday to Thailand again

Also, why is there a difference between created and rendered? Doesn’t make any sense? It takes so much time to load a scene again, usually it’s easier to quickly render :unsure:
 
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dan_roger69 said:
If L&P prioritizes the main storyline (Sam Dylan and Sophia) more people are going to subscribe and with more money he can hire a script writer if he thinks he's going to have writer's block.
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What, a script writer he said he already wrote the full story.
You mean L$P is
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he didn’t hire any help when he had 2500 patrons what makes you think he can hire someone now with only 567 patrons?
 
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